I agreed with the title and description. Things that bother me are kicks not loud enough and this sounds generic. You should consider add some overdive to the dubstep basses and layer some more to the supersaws. Cool and good.
I agreed with the title and description. Things that bother me are kicks not loud enough and this sounds generic. You should consider add some overdive to the dubstep basses and layer some more to the supersaws. Cool and good.
Thanks for your input! I'm trying out some new mixing with my drums, so it's good that you can find a problem. Will fix in new songs.
On the other hand, I will customize the dubstep basses some more, and maybe mess with distortion and harmonics. Supersaws aren't really my thing, but I really could do something about having more layers to my leads.
really cool :D love the feel of this track (i'm not really good with vocabulary). you can't really say you didn't use any samples because you used SF2Player :P The second part's felt a little bit worn out since it's the same melody throughout with the same chord progression. Still, it's really impressive to use LMMS built in plugins only (especially Organic, I can't even find an use for it.) Those ambiences are amazing and overall this song is majestic. 4.5/5 for me :D
In my defense, the second half of the song is supposed to take on a different perspective, or a different mood of the situation.
Here are some other songs where I used Organic (but for drops):
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/775642
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/805083
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/805085
htis is gae and bed an u sstop maeking musics >:|
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cool and g o o d. i really love this atmosphere of this one. the only thing i would recommend is a good mastering however - everything are way too quiet :p.
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I'll probably remaster it sometime in the future lol
thanks for relying on me for help :p. everything is composited nicely together, just need some more eq to make everything really shine out :D keep up the good work
Finally! I’ve done something acceptable! :D
mastering needs works :p. piano has too much high end. need some good mixdown process too. kicks doesn't really fit. i would recommend a switch up in melody. with only a little bit of tweaking, this song would be a masterpiece. really liked it ;)
I have bad headphones, so, the mixing in all of my songs is off. that's just a given at this point haha.
Yes, I agree with you that there need to be some changes. thanks for pointing them out.
:)
You're the second person to mention the drums, or maybe even the third.
So, they definitely need to be changed. eh, it was the best I could do, with given resources, I will probably update this soon, and change things, like drums.
of course, I'm still learning, just like everyone else, and It is nice when people leave constructive criticism!
So, Thank you for taking the time to leave the nice review, and stating the things wrong with it!
:)
nice, you got yourself lmms :D. i would recommend you to use triple osc, zynaddsub, and monstro to their full potential. (the cover of "final boss" by me was made entirely using bit invaders + some drums samples on the internet so you should use it sometimes too ;p)
Okay!
(the genre should be "Dance")
pretty cool track. the transitions are too long. i would recommend using a computer daw because you can add more things and edit the song easily.
I don't have the money man...
(this is melodic dubstep. it would be future bass without the growls)
mixing needs works. (vocal chop too loud and need more reverb). build up synth is weird. 3 drops are exactly the same. chords needs some l a y e r s. ambience too loud (cut the sub too). when drop doesn't have enough bass. no hi hats???
(the rules states that "won’t accept audio that has the sole purpose of being comedic, not to mention sound effects, voice acting, or parodies." welp, no ways back now since nguac doesn't allows updating tracks.)
Listen up suckboi. Who said this was a comedic thing?
Thanks for reviewing my song though
I find your review helpful.
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