mastering needs works :p. piano has too much high end. need some good mixdown process too. kicks doesn't really fit. i would recommend a switch up in melody. with only a little bit of tweaking, this song would be a masterpiece. really liked it ;)
mastering needs works :p. piano has too much high end. need some good mixdown process too. kicks doesn't really fit. i would recommend a switch up in melody. with only a little bit of tweaking, this song would be a masterpiece. really liked it ;)
I have bad headphones, so, the mixing in all of my songs is off. that's just a given at this point haha.
Yes, I agree with you that there need to be some changes. thanks for pointing them out.
:)
You're the second person to mention the drums, or maybe even the third.
So, they definitely need to be changed. eh, it was the best I could do, with given resources, I will probably update this soon, and change things, like drums.
of course, I'm still learning, just like everyone else, and It is nice when people leave constructive criticism!
So, Thank you for taking the time to leave the nice review, and stating the things wrong with it!
:)
nice, you got yourself lmms :D. i would recommend you to use triple osc, zynaddsub, and monstro to their full potential. (the cover of "final boss" by me was made entirely using bit invaders + some drums samples on the internet so you should use it sometimes too ;p)
Okay!
i strongly agreed
(the genre should be "Dance")
pretty cool track. the transitions are too long. i would recommend using a computer daw because you can add more things and edit the song easily.
I don't have the money man...
(this is melodic dubstep. it would be future bass without the growls)
mixing needs works. (vocal chop too loud and need more reverb). build up synth is weird. 3 drops are exactly the same. chords needs some l a y e r s. ambience too loud (cut the sub too). when drop doesn't have enough bass. no hi hats???
(the rules states that "won’t accept audio that has the sole purpose of being comedic, not to mention sound effects, voice acting, or parodies." welp, no ways back now since nguac doesn't allows updating tracks.)
Listen up suckboi. Who said this was a comedic thing?
Thanks for reviewing my song though
I find your review helpful.
by "mixing" i meant "balancing the volume every instruments and percussions". if you could fix it in every track then your songs will sounds better ;p. not enough high frequencies make the song sounds dull. better transitioning needed too.
Actually, that’s exactly what I was thinking when I wrote you the message, now I can really try to do some thing
the reason why the lead was bad because there are nothing layering it :p the snare and kick was unfitting, maybe some eq would help. mixing and master need work. any other part than build up and drop are really good. i couldn't really create something like this after 6 months of making music lol.
Thank you for leaving review!
Yes, mixing and mastering are really my problems. I'll try to learn more about it in near future and become better at producing.
i has listened to both of the songs and you have problems with mixing and mastering. i cnnot type out everything because it would be too long but there are various tips and videos of it on youtube so spend time on it. as usual, very nice melodies and ideas. keep up the work :D
please ignore everything i've made before 2019 i'm too lazy to delete them all
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