good experimenting. the things that bothers me are the bass is too loud for the mix and has a lot of DC offset (fix by cutting most of the things that goes under 20hz). can you link me to that video please?
good experimenting. the things that bothers me are the bass is too loud for the mix and has a lot of DC offset (fix by cutting most of the things that goes under 20hz). can you link me to that video please?
I agreed with the title and description. Things that bother me are kicks not loud enough and this sounds generic. You should consider add some overdive to the dubstep basses and layer some more to the supersaws. Cool and good.
Thanks for your input! I'm trying out some new mixing with my drums, so it's good that you can find a problem. Will fix in new songs.
On the other hand, I will customize the dubstep basses some more, and maybe mess with distortion and harmonics. Supersaws aren't really my thing, but I really could do something about having more layers to my leads.
really cool :D love the feel of this track (i'm not really good with vocabulary). you can't really say you didn't use any samples because you used SF2Player :P The second part's felt a little bit worn out since it's the same melody throughout with the same chord progression. Still, it's really impressive to use LMMS built in plugins only (especially Organic, I can't even find an use for it.) Those ambiences are amazing and overall this song is majestic. 4.5/5 for me :D
In my defense, the second half of the song is supposed to take on a different perspective, or a different mood of the situation.
Here are some other songs where I used Organic (but for drops):
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/775642
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/805083
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/805085
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over compression is a huge problem here. this would fall into the hard house region. drop has bad mixing (or maybe just because of the compression). too stereo ("wide") bass make people hard to hear it. still, love those sounds. i should learn sound designing more :p
cool and g o o d. i really love this atmosphere of this one. the only thing i would recommend is a good mastering however - everything are way too quiet :p.
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I'll probably remaster it sometime in the future lol
thanks for relying on me for help :p. everything is composited nicely together, just need some more eq to make everything really shine out :D keep up the good work
Finally! I’ve done something acceptable! :D
mastering needs works :p. piano has too much high end. need some good mixdown process too. kicks doesn't really fit. i would recommend a switch up in melody. with only a little bit of tweaking, this song would be a masterpiece. really liked it ;)
I have bad headphones, so, the mixing in all of my songs is off. that's just a given at this point haha.
Yes, I agree with you that there need to be some changes. thanks for pointing them out.
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You're the second person to mention the drums, or maybe even the third.
So, they definitely need to be changed. eh, it was the best I could do, with given resources, I will probably update this soon, and change things, like drums.
of course, I'm still learning, just like everyone else, and It is nice when people leave constructive criticism!
So, Thank you for taking the time to leave the nice review, and stating the things wrong with it!
:)
nice, you got yourself lmms :D. i would recommend you to use triple osc, zynaddsub, and monstro to their full potential. (the cover of "final boss" by me was made entirely using bit invaders + some drums samples on the internet so you should use it sometimes too ;p)
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