I love this future house style: gritty and aggressive :P Sound design and melody is pretty good but mixing and mastering wise, it needs a lot of touch-ups. Cymbals and leads are way too loud, build lacks energy, too much high frequencies, clipping everywhere. Some tips for ya:
- Get a spectrum analyzer. SPAN is a free one that every producers love to use. Use it to check your mixing if any elements is too loud.
- Use several compressors on the master, each has its own setting. There are many guides about it on the internet.
- Put a limiter at the end of your mastering chain and limit it to -0,3 dB. That should prevent most of the distortions from happening.
Anyway nice job on this, you can always learn to improve yourself along the way:D